Nice jose! I know stuffs on foreground would be darkest in value but they arent black! We should see sothing in the foreground. You put all black like that made your painting flat. Also theres no shift in values in the middle ground. But this is still a good painting! Oh dont be afraid to saturate your color. Goro and Annlyn actually mentioned that.
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Nice jose! I know stuffs on foreground would be darkest in value but they arent black! We should see sothing in the foreground. You put all black like that made your painting flat. Also theres no shift in values in the middle ground. But this is still a good painting! Oh dont be afraid to saturate your color. Goro and Annlyn actually mentioned that.
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